“But you know that there’s something you need / Yearning for The One to sit down and read / Your whole world has been monochrome / Only now you drip with color tones” are clever, and the harmonies are definitely sounding better than before!
Ah, thanks! I think having a strong and simple theme was helpful in focusing the lyric’s direction. :D There weren’t much harmonies in here, but I’m definitely trying to improve on vocal parts by being self aware until I could get someone to teach what I need to learn.